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Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 14:49:13
by dorminWS
You've got a typo.................
Should read "Have never been convicted of AN assault ....", not "A assault".
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 15:12:53
by meak99
I'd vote against using photos of ammo as the "bullets".
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 15:31:23
by tursiops
Jake, "bullets" are little round black dots, not "bullets." Nice, though....but your perception is right, not very serious.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 16:16:08
by resq45
I agree with meak99 & tursiops
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 17:18:30
by Chasbo00
One last nitpick from me... Card now states "we noticed"... but everything else says I not we. We also suggests royalty to some.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 17:40:10
by SHMIV
Chasbo00 wrote:One last nitpick from me... Card now states "we noticed"... but everything else says I not we. We also suggests royalty to some.
Whether "I" or "we" is used, the next word in the sentence should be "have". "I have (or I've) noticed..." or "We have (or We've) noticed".
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 17:53:06
by Chasbo00
SHMIV wrote:
Whether "I" or "we" is used, the next word in the sentence should be "have". "I have (or I've) noticed..." or "We have (or We've) noticed".
Why is that? Is there some grammar rule here?
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 18:21:10
by mk4
allingeneral wrote:I like the idea of including an email address to be removed from the list...
How about
gunfriendly@vgof.net
Also, is anyone interested in sifting through this thread and pulling out locations that have been identified and compiling a list? That was the original intent of this thread, anyway. I'm not sure how often the VCDL list is updated, but if it's like much of their website, it hasn't been updated for quite some time.
I'll go through the thread and try to compile a list, Rick.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 18:23:09
by mk4
resq45 wrote:I agree with meak99 & tursiops
+3 on just using the round dots for the bullet list.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 19:10:15
by SHMIV
Chasbo00 wrote:
Why is that? Is there some grammar rule here?
I was fairly certain that there was. But, I wanted to consult my mother, who is an English major. She also has a background in marketing, so I figured that her insight would have some value here.
Mom indicated that both ways were acceptable, but preferred "We have". She also suggested the use of the royal "We", as it implies a group of people instead of just one person. The implication of a group implies a larger loss of potential income.
The entire sentence that she suggested was, "We have noticed your sign and will respectfully take our business elsewhere."
She particularly liked the inclusion of the email address, as it implies that we are a reasonable group of people, and not a bunch of hot-heads with printed cards. Though, she also noted that it may also spawn some angry hate mail. Should hate mail be received, will it be posted for all of us to enjoy?
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 19:46:48
by allingeneral
mk4 wrote:allingeneral wrote:I like the idea of including an email address to be removed from the list...
How about
gunfriendly@vgof.net
Also, is anyone interested in sifting through this thread and pulling out locations that have been identified and compiling a list? That was the original intent of this thread, anyway. I'm not sure how often the VCDL list is updated, but if it's like much of their website, it hasn't been updated for quite some time.
I'll go through the thread and try to compile a list, Rick.
Certainly would appreciate that Nate. You can post here or email to me at
gunfriendly@vgof.net
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 19:47:40
by allingeneral
SHMIV wrote:Though, she also noted that it may also spawn some angry hate mail. Should hate mail be received, will it be posted for all of us to enjoy?
ABSOLUTELY!!
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 19:53:08
by Chasbo00
@SHMIV, thanks for the explanation. I'm happy to hear I did not miss some grammar rule. Jake should go with your mom's recommendation. I'm a product of military school where they taught us to avoid passive voice and not to use additional words when possible, plus I suck at writing.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Tue, 20 Dec 2011 23:07:32
by SHMIV
@ Rick- Awesome, that could be fun
@ Chas- It sounds like they taught you from "The Elements of Style". That instructional publication was very big on the omission of unnecessary words, as well as the avoidance of passive voice. I used to own it, and I recall having seen it referenced in several schoolbooks. Myself, I grew up writing reports that had requirements in regard to the number of words used, thus I have a tendency to add extra words to my writing, lol.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 11:33:11
by MWhiteDesigns
I would like to say, I made a poor decision a few years back and I do have a DUI. However DUI's do not disqualify you from having a CHP. I'm sure there are quite a few on this forum that have one and also have a concealed. Just think that may be slightly misleading. Assault, felony etc will always be a permanent disqualifer, as for DUI, not so much. Any thoughts?
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 13:04:52
by Jakeiscrazy
MWhiteDesigns wrote:I would like to say, I made a poor decision a few years back and I do have a DUI. However DUI's do not disqualify you from having a CHP. I'm sure there are quite a few on this forum that have one and also have a concealed. Just think that may be slightly misleading. Assault, felony etc will always be a permanent disqualifer, as for DUI, not so much. Any thoughts?
Yes it does, but I think only for 3 years, according to the state police website.
An individual who has been convicted of a violation of § 18.2-266 or a substantially similar local ordinance, or of public drunkenness, or of a substantially similar offense under the laws of any other state, the District of Columbia, the United States, or its territories within the three-year period immediately preceding the application, or who is a habitual drunkard as determined pursuant to § 4.1-33.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 13:24:32
by MWhiteDesigns
You sir are correct. However the card states that you have NEVER been convicted.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 14:37:48
by VBshooter
Sadly due to lack of support to fight it that 3 year DUI denial also got added to out of state DUI;s a couple sessions ago. not even a whimper from the gun people in this state,,,,Seems a dizzy rep from Newport News thought it was a good idea along with killing 3/4 of the good stuff that year..
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 21:14:44
by Jakeiscrazy
MWhiteDesigns wrote:You sir are correct. However the card states that you have NEVER been convicted.
Yeah my mistake, I went ahead and removed DUI as it's overly complicated to explain the 3 year thing. Thanks for catching that error.
Re: Firearm Unfriendly Businesses in Virginia
Posted: Wed, 21 Dec 2011 21:26:09
by Jakeiscrazy
Alright here is the newest version. Let me know if I missed something I should have edited.